KAL CHAUDViN KI RAAT THI - GHULAM ALI

hey, i am posting here my feelings, my sentiments regarding life, love and etc. and i am using poem as a medium. in my all poem i am using a object to define the things but if i am rightly placed my idea you are definitely able to coin a different mean of that. i am not good in English so don't mind mean to aap samajh hi gaye honge. i am fortunate ki you are looking here give ur critical suggestions about my poems.